I need some character names (last names too please?)… Help? Best names gets 10 points.?
So I have them discribed but I need some names so far they are named A B C and D. AB+C are guys and D is a girl So if you could help me out that would be nice. Here is their discription…
Out side a school. Mid January. It’s cold and there is light snowfall, but there is no snow covering the ground. There are a lot of groups of students covering the high school’s grounds. A bus pulls up and with a loud screech stops. A bunch of students get off but one boy in particular jumps off the last step and strolls to a tree where two other guys are chilling. The boy off the bus (A) carrying a plain black messenger bag and is wearing a wearing an un-zipped modern black leather jacket that appears to have been over worn, or perhaps it is just vintage in nature, a navy blue zip-up hoodie, with the hood over his head, that is also un-zipped, and a black shirt that says Rehab is for quitters on it is the final layer to his ensemble of shirts. His light-wash jeans seem to have a dirt stain just below the right kneecap. He has black wavy shortish hair and deep brown eyes. His skin is slightly too tan as if he was Mexican. The boy who greets him with a handshake (B) is wearing no coat at all but is wearing a forest green baggy zip-up hoodie that looks to be a hammy down. His hood is up over a baseball cap. His jeans also appear also slightly dirty. His hair is blonde and spiky straight. He is tan but a normal white tan. Like he just got back from Florida. His eyes are blue. The other guy who stays leaning against the tree (C) is wearing a nice clean pair of jeans; a tight black zip-up hoodie that is just tight enough so you can see is well toned biceps. His hoodie is also un-zipped to reveal a brown shirt. He has brown long shaggy hair that goes down just to below the ears. He has emerald green eyes.
Oh! And the girl… I forgot her =/ Her discription=
A slim girl Valerie dressed in a long grey wool pea coat is walking up the sidewalk. She has a pink pastel scarf on and matching gloves and a hat. She is wearing light wash jeans. Her long curly brown hair is blowing in the wind behind her. Her blue eyes are looking down. She is carrying a few school books and a flute case. Her light wash grey jeans nearly blend in with her surroundings but her tennis shoes are bright orange and catch your eye immediately.
I just need a last name for her.
Messenger Bag Resources
- Wings + Horns Wool/Leather Peacoat Autumn/Winter 2010 | Selectism.com
- Belstaff Foxhall quilted leather jacket -
Clothes Fashion - Hoodie Template | Vectorss
Comments
I got bored reading this.
Your description of the clothing is too tedious.
Work on that first.
Dante Salvatore – A
Liam Sullivan – B
Dakota Ayres – C
hmmm.. u know the best charecters in books have really odd name, e.g : hermione granger.. when come to reckon of it… it weird.. but the book gives it a charecter.. sooo:
A: Matt Rogers
B: JULIO!! idk.. Tony maybe ??
C: James Tan :p.. last name could be.. hmm.. LeVox ?? Sry, Rascal flatts fan :p..
D: Valerie Green
Olivia got that one right…to much time on the details of the clothes… I read it all, and I cant remember the first one. The only thing that stands out now is the dirt stain below somebody’s knee on his jeans… How did he get that dirt stain? Dis he help some small ancient lady with a blue felt cap with white lace over her eyes change a flat tire when he left Mcdonalds after getting 2 huge macs and an apple pie? Work on the clothes honey and then the names….
In the 70s I wrote a book called Huge Bear. The main character’s name was Herman Dougherty. He was a rickety ancient man that went to the zoo every day to feed this black bear a jar of honey… always took a taxi cuz he couldn’t drive anymore. The taxi driver’s name was Hose Martin. Add a girl to your group…call her Simone. No last name…cuz she is only known by Simone. Why is it that you want to describe everybodys’ clothes so much?…Is it cuz you want us to get to know your characters?… Talk more about their attitudes, backgrounds, and what they do more. Kudos to ya girl….you are on track though…keep this up, cuz I reckon you have a really excellent imagination, and you will be a fantastic writer some day.
Girl name- Darleen Smith
boy-Aiden Charels
boy-Bennet or Brennet Chappel
boy- Chris Moxly
I like the first name Corbin, and Alpha’s suggestion of the last name Salvatore.
Other suggestions for guys’ names: Evan, Michael, Sylvester, Orion (Rye for small) and Justice
Valerie Meadows
Valerie Brooke
Valerie McKenzie
You could always look at a phone book or google surnames.
Excellent luck, and don’t forget that learning your characters’ quirks, personalities and habits is even more vital than their physical appearances!
Leave a Comment